Monday, 27 June 2016

My  Survival Backpack         
                                                                                                                                   
1Family photo     to remember my family and my home  
2 toothbrush .to clean my teeth so it dazet  get dortey
3Water . so if i get thirsty
4phone to ring my family . call help .
5 Top & past  . to get warm .
6Fruit   if i'm get  hungryy
7Phone chargers. If my phone get flat
8 present from my mum and dad  to keep  
9 one pair shoes .
10  ball to play with in case if i get bored .

11 book to read while i'm walking  .

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5 comments:

  1. Anonymous4 July 2016 at 09:41

    this is realy cool maby if you cheeked over your speeling

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  2. Faith4 July 2016 at 10:01

    Hi Caitlin. This post is really cool, I like your ideas of what you would take in your survival backpack if you had to leave your home to find some place new to live. I think your post would read more clearly if you looked at your spelling and placings of punctuation marks. I also think you should put a full-stop after the numbers.

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  3. Anonymous4 July 2016 at 10:09

    Hi Caitlin i just to say i liked it and it was cool but you should edit your words.

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  4. Anonymous2 August 2016 at 10:43

    Hi Cailtin, Really like the ideas on your Survival pack, But I was wondering about the phone part,wouldn't you need internet/Wifi to be able to connect to do things with your phone?Also keep trying on the spelling!What are you surviving from?

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  5. Anonymous4 August 2016 at 10:15

    Hi Caitlin, I like how you included why you would put these things in your bag. Next time maybe you could include some capital letters.

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