We were learning to write recounts.we used who what and when where why .
My Shoe Holidays
I was shiny and clean we were getting ready to go Hokitika this person was wearing me . I stept on sand some sand got in me. I was clean In till this girl got me wet and dirty and sandy. I got on this rock then there was a bug on me it looked like a ladybug it looked very big to me then We kept walking . We walk back to the the beach she took me off her feet .she run to the sand then she was looking for me but it took a long time then she founded me.
We went to a shop I never been in it looked like a shoe place.
She took me off again to try a peer shoes like me .
I was scared I thought she get them but she didn't.
Then I was going to a cafe there a lot of people looking at me I was just looking down . then she sat down eating . I was on the floor under a table
Then I was going to the car .findley were going now I really didn't like it there was a lot of people looking at me . There was blanket on me its was dark I couldn't see so we looking at old house it looked like very old it was broken window and old safe in there she took me in a house to look. I stepped on glass and water was dripping on me. It was so sunny the water dried on me and this person stept on me it looked like she didn't care
I got stepped on I alway wonder why am I down here .
I went in the car again to go home.
She took me off and run outside and left me in her room under her bed It was dark we couldn't see It was to dark.
Caitlin
