my shoe holidays .

We were learning to write recounts.we used who what and when where why .  

My Shoe Holidays

I was shiny and clean we  were getting ready to go Hokitika this person was wearing  me . I stept on sand some sand got in me. I was clean In till this girl got me wet and dirty and sandy. I got on this  rock then there was a bug on me  it looked like a ladybug it looked very big to me then We kept walking . We  walk back to the the beach she took me off her feet  .she run to the sand then she was looking for me but it took a long time then she founded  me.

We went to a shop I never been in it looked like a shoe place.

She took me off again to try a peer shoes like me .

I was scared I thought she get them but she didn't.

Then I was going to a cafe there a lot of people looking at me I was just looking down . then she sat down eating . I  was on the floor under a table  

Then I was going to the car .findley were going now I really didn't like it there  was a lot of people looking at me . There was blanket  on me its was dark I couldn't see so we looking at old house it looked like very old it was broken window and old safe in there she took me in a house to look. I  stepped on  glass and water  was dripping on me. It was so sunny the water dried on me and this person stept on me it looked like she didn't care

I got stepped on I alway wonder why am I down here .

I went in the car again to go home.  

She took me off and  run outside and left me in her room under her bed It was dark we  couldn't  see It was to dark.

Caitlin