Thursday, 2 August 2018

My slam poem

 Animals
Need to be loved as well ,
not hurt 
Not throwing litter by destroying their home .
How do we know what animals feel
Instead of eating them, let’s appreciate and love them for real
Animals can be vicious their reason why ?
Were taking their land and places they keep their babies alive 
They need to be cared loved for, not abandoned
They need kindness love not left outside in the cold 
And do not  need to be  stuck in rubbish 
From us littering it's time we be kind 
It's not kind to be mean to  these animals out in the dark ,
it's not  fair to animals, 
what do they do to us 
Maybe one day we can be their heroes
 and love them, 
like they would to us 
They don't deserve to be thrown in the war 
when they have already been fighting their whole life 
We as humans just need to realise that 
they have homes and feelings as well.

This week we have  been witting slam poems 
we've been reading it out of front of the class  some of the poems were emotional.


2 comments:

  1. Kia Ora Caitlin,
    My name is Arihia and I’m a year seven student in Te Ngahere at Paihia School.
    I really like your slam poem, I think it’s very cool. I think what you wrote in your slam poem is very true. Keep up the great work!

    Yours truly,
    Arihia

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  2. Kia ora Caitlin,
    My name is Emma and I’m a year seven student in Te Ngahere at Paihia School. I really like your slam poem. I think it’s great. Everything that you wrote was very true. Keep up the good work.

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Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.